Tuesday, 9 December 2014

Audience feeback on first draft of review


Positive feedback:

  • Structure is good
  • Layout looks professional
  • Comments by professionals
  • Release dates, and website included
Improvements:

  • Use of grammar needs improvement
  • Too much free space- tried too hard to stick to layout
  • Caption should be smaller
  • Verdict not standing out
  • A change of font is needed

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